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THE LEGEND
Pretty good! i felt some of the shots were timed strangely so not a perfect score the hold on the girl blasted with the shotgun held a bit too long, i think. I also think maybe some of the shots would have benefited from some more interesting lighting. that scene in the dark room looked awesome, i think some more moody lighting like that would have helped a lot. maybe even some colored lights? anyway, you did great and I hope to see more!
Finally, this meme brings something absolutely amazing
very well designed, just challenging enough to keep me thinking but completely winnable
You're obviously young, since you're valiantly defending this, and also saying you recently found out about windows parodies.
You know what this really lacks? Everything.
There is no attempt to animate, nothing to DO with the game, notepad, a pointless button, an error, and a bad joke. wow.
but you're learning to code and work in flash, clearly; keep going, make more things in flash, but this isn't where you should divert your attention. focus on something that can actually provide entertainment. Betas don't belong on newgrounds, come back when your work is something you consider truly amazing, not "unfinished."
It doesn't function, and trust me I know Scratch, you didn't program this with any skill.
Pretty neat jam~ ★
Bloody Tears is always awesome
Thank you. I'm considering doing other Castlevania I-III tracks, too!
ooo neato! felt a bit short though, like it wanted to go longer
Oh yeah! Thank you for the comment! <3 It sure is getting longer! >:D I hope you will like the new version more then!
I think you could get a bit more expressive with the color choices. you've made a slightly darker + cooler shadow, but didn't vary the hue in that shadow very much, you could add some bits of different cool hues in there for more interest. as long as they're all leaning in the grays, it should still work no matter what color. minimal can still be interesting to look at
your blue background and the white paper would reflect their colors into the orange, and the orange would reflect some, well, orange onto the paper and in the shadows. the blue being reflected into the orange would make some nice compliments too.
You should work on your anatomy.
Yep. That's what this is...and I assure you any weird exaggerated curves here are entirely deliberate.
Your color and detail is all fantastic! but that pose looks very uncomforable and he'd probably fall over even trying to stand like that. Keep in mind the weight of your character so you can pose them better.
Thank you! I used a real reference for the character for this piece, I suspected myself it didn't look quite right. So you hit the nail on the head there, thanks for the comment!
I'm that animator, I used to do let's plays and streams! 2018's new profiles look cool
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American Intercontinental univ
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